There's no meat. The plot moves at about mach 3, so going too fast for anyone to really catch it. There was no real reason for Ninja Guy to betray Bowser that I could see. I'm sure you could respond with a reason, but it should have been in the story itself. Again, all dialogue, no action. Okay, I know you have a bit in there, but its lack luster and quickly pushed to the side to make room for more dialogue.
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icefire23
wow... betrayal?
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find out NEXT TIME