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wow... betrayal?

find out NEXT TIME

There's no meat. The plot moves at about mach 3, so going too fast for anyone to really catch it. There was no real reason for Ninja Guy to betray Bowser that I could see. I'm sure you could respond with a reason, but it should have been in the story itself. Again, all dialogue, no action. Okay, I know you have a bit in there, but its lack luster and quickly pushed to the side to make room for more dialogue.