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A shy guys tale episode 2

Posted by shyguydude1 - April 7th, 2010


Where we last left off Mario Luigi and Yoshi were about to battle Ninja Guy Bowser's new creation. Meanwhile Bowser slips out into the elevator to the top of his castle. now we go back to the episode

Bowser: Well Peach looks like we are finally getting married.
Peach: LET ME GO YOU OVER SIZED-
Bowser: Now clam down Peach it'll all be over before you know it.
Peach: wa-what do you mean?
Bowser: Mario and Luigi are fighting my newest creation.
Peach: okay Mario will pound that thing.
Bowser: Ninja Guy is the most strongest thing in tis world and the next.
Peach: Doesn't matter MARIO WILL STILL WIN!
Bowser: grr...

CRASH!
Bowser: Looks like Ninja guy is doing well on his frist day of work.

Ninja Guy slashed Yoshi and used that momentum to spin off Mario and Kick Luigi in the face.
Luigi: THAT'S IT I'M OUT OF HERE!
Mario: DON'T YOU DARE!
TO make sure Luigi didn't scram Mario threw Luigi into Ninja guy but he dodged.
Ninja Guy: is that the BEST you could do?
Yoshi took advantage of Ninja guy's gaurd being down so he rammed him but Ninja guy saw it coming and jumped out of the way making Yosh ihit Mario.
Yoshi: i agree with Luigi we should run maybe you shoul admit Bowser's won this time.
Ninja guy: Yes run while i give you the chance.
Mario: i'm NOT giving up.
Ninja guy grabs Mario.
Ninja guy: you are surely persisant. but...(raises his sword towards mario) I've seen better...
Bowser: My new shy guy toy should have killed MArio by now...
Peach: i told you mario probably won.
Bowser: WHY IS THE EVEVATOR MOVING SO SLOW?!

WHHHHHAAAAAAOOOOO!

Bowser: A little late but hey he got the job done.
Peach: Mario...(starts crying)
A red blur flew up on the left side of the elevator.
Mario: Sorry but you CAN'T kill me THAT easy.
Bowser: RAGGGGG!
Peach: MARIO!
Bowser: to bad i planned for this!
Bowser pulled a lever realasing the sides and having mario fall.
Bowser: HA HAVE A NICE FALL MARIO!
Mario started wall jumping the shaft.
Peach: Mario AGAIN!
Bowser: YOU ARE REALLY STARTING TO PISS ME OFF!
Bowser used his flame to cut the wires and casuing the elevator to fall on Mario.
Luigi: MAMMIA!
the elevator fell on the ground.
Yoshi: Mario!
Luigi MARRRRRRRRIIIIIOOOOO!!!!!
Peach: NO!
Bowser: YES! Bowser burned Yoshi and Luigi.
Bowser: it's a good thing i ALSO bulit stairs...crap.
Mario was standing on Bowser's throne.
Mario: how many times have you tried to kill me?
Bowser: HOW?! HOW ARE YOU SURVIVING!?
????: You can blame me for that.
Bowser: NINJA GUY!?


Comments

wow... betrayal?

find out NEXT TIME

There's no meat. The plot moves at about mach 3, so going too fast for anyone to really catch it. There was no real reason for Ninja Guy to betray Bowser that I could see. I'm sure you could respond with a reason, but it should have been in the story itself. Again, all dialogue, no action. Okay, I know you have a bit in there, but its lack luster and quickly pushed to the side to make room for more dialogue.